Saturday, January 9, 2010

WAITING FOR U.........



DAYS WENT ON AND ON
YOU LEFT ME ALONE
WITH THIS FRIGHTENING LONELINESS...
THOSE UNSPOKEN WORDS OF US
JUST REVOLVED AROUND TO REACH ONE OTHER...
OUR EVERLASTING MEMORIES
ARE THE ONLY BOON FOR ME IN THIS WORLD NOW...
THIS AGITATING WORLD OF MINE
WAS JUST BCOS OF UR UNLEASHED LOVE...
I'M AWAITING ON THE SHORE FOR YOU...
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13 comments:

  1. lokeshJanuary 9, 2010 at 8:51 AM

    hooooooo....
    cool.......

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  2. UnknownJanuary 9, 2010 at 9:41 PM

    De Bezt aaf Yrz ...
    Gr8 Yuuz aaf Vordz...
    Exquisite Thoughts Upplied...
    MIE FAVURIT (:>)

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  3. smileJanuary 9, 2010 at 11:38 PM

    itz nize...but till last u have to wait oly..no one ll come!!!!!!!!!!!

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  4. UnknownJanuary 10, 2010 at 5:48 AM

    its really nice minu....is there any thing behind that....or just a poem...any way...true love ll never lose...

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  5. santhoshJanuary 10, 2010 at 6:04 AM

    nice... heart touching... :)

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  6. UnknownJanuary 10, 2010 at 6:00 PM

    i can find no flow in it. could be more better nxt time

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  7. UnknownJanuary 13, 2010 at 6:47 AM

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  8. UnknownJanuary 13, 2010 at 6:49 AM

    whoz dat madam!!!!!!!!!!!!!!but don worry at climax he will get u...

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  9. UnknownJanuary 19, 2010 at 1:18 AM

    nice poem...its heart touching words.waiting for someone is pain and also lovable feelings.if time comes water will come and soak u fuly.let c

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  10. AMITESH KUMARJanuary 26, 2010 at 11:02 AM

    wow....amazed..!!! so nice poem u hv wrriten...so Minu dnt wrry...a day will cm whn u'll got ur true unleashed love on d shore.....

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  11. nithyaJanuary 31, 2010 at 7:51 PM

    hi
    nice poem.........
    i think waiting also one type of happiness with someone memories.............
    but,tat waiting itself itself make u a mad........
    so,b careful n b happy...............
    wait .it is not a matter........
    but 4 some period only..........
    then u carry next work.............

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  12. NagarjunaSeptember 27, 2010 at 11:14 AM

    waiting for loved one is heart painful mintu.
    anyway this also nice....Keep it up

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  13. NagarjunaSeptember 27, 2010 at 11:15 AM

    This picture also exactly suitable to ur words

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